Angel of Death

Hey Ash, Well I liked this chapter but there were a few things that I wanted to point out. I open my mouth to feed but halt. Looking up at ...

Hello again! Wow this was intense. Your descriptions, were, as always wonderful and this I think, was one of the chapters that makes this so much different than Twilight. The ...

Hey Ash, I loved this chapter!! My favorite part was when Isaac and Sophia started singing along to the Beatles's song. It was nice that they finally had a moment ...

Jane Eyre was a great book. I don't know what people are whinning about.

"It'll be all right, love. I didn't mean to upset you." Jenny said, patting her back. "I know, but this all just happened so fast." Anna cried. "Try to get ...

I decided to break Part 8 into two parts so I'm leaving the readers with a cliffhanger, so to speak. ~Edited~

Hello again! Ah this was another great chapter. Finally Isaac and Sophia have a scene together because I was starting to worry that things were going downhill for her...though its ...

Hey Ash, This was such a sad chapter and it kinda reminded me of the time I was watching Becoming Jane and Jane left Tom so that he could provide ...

Note: To those who know me, I'm not good at finishing a book because I always come up with new ideas but I kinda need a break from my current ...

Thanks Olivia and Ash! I did give up on this a long time ago but I do love this because this was my first actual book that I was going ...

chichi: Thanks for the crit, and no I haven't seen Star Wars, fell asleep every time I tried to watch it. I know this is cliche and I'm going to ...

Hey Esme, thanks for critiquing Planned Insanity. I will continue it now. It was too hard for me to keep off anyways. Okay. This was a little better but I ...

I am currently reading Northanger Abbey by the lovely Jane Austen. Tis a great book so far. ~Angel

Hey Ash, thanks for the heads up! I loved this chapter! And I really adore William. There's just something about him that's different than the usually over-confident perfect male counterpart ...

Hey Ash, I read this yesterday on my phone because I wasn't home. This was great and William did kinda seem not human but now that you've confirmed that he ...